[DevilsWin]

I was just wanting some of your alls opinions on this. How can i make it better? It is for my Oral interpretation class and begins with an selection from Langston Hughes's Let America Be America Again.

Yet I'm the one who dreamt our basic dream
In the Old World while still a serf of kings,
Who dreamt a dream so strong, so brave, so true,
That even yet its mighty daring sings
In every brick and stone, in every furrow turned
That's made America the land it has become.
O, I'm the man who sailed those early seas
In search of what I meant to be my home--
For I'm the one who left dark Ireland's shore,
And Poland's plain, and England's grassy lea,
And torn from Black Africa's strand I came
To build a "homeland of the free."

" The day was September Eleventh 2001, an ordinary day that has been sketched into ever Americans mind. On that day our way of life, our very freedom came under attack by a terroristic party that had every intention of shattering our great nation. Now seven years later our country and the world have been affected by that shameless attack. On that day our great nation began a transisiton of freedom to solitary confiment. Once a land of liberation from communism, a land where one could be themselves and nothing more, became a land with a watchful eye in every corner of the world. We now as America are liberators, attempting to free those binded by their nations chains. With gas prices now declining, a redemition in the 2008 election, lets shout from the hill tops of Kentucky, from the Valley's of Arizona and the plains of Kansas to allow, - 'Let America Be America Again by Langston Hughes...."

You left out the part about America only helping countries that have Oil or White Skin.