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12-20-2010, 01:19 AM
In college we had a group activity where we had to Add 2 to 3 lines to a story and pass it to the next person!...It's neat to see how and where the story goes!...
When you post make sure you quote the person above you!
No more than 3 lines at a time!
Be creative and descriptive!
I'll start it out!....
CHAPTER ONE
Dressed in matching Bar Maid costumes, Anna and Marie Begly drove down the dark bumpy road leading to the Tripple D ranch! The Davidson brothers, Michael, Adam, and Bryan, hosted a extravagant Halloween party every year, and this years theme was Pirates! Anna and Marie were too excited and too busy talking about the party to notice the gas gage on the beat up Chevy truck they were driving was pointing to E!
When you post make sure you quote the person above you!
No more than 3 lines at a time!
Be creative and descriptive!
I'll start it out!....
CHAPTER ONE
Dressed in matching Bar Maid costumes, Anna and Marie Begly drove down the dark bumpy road leading to the Tripple D ranch! The Davidson brothers, Michael, Adam, and Bryan, hosted a extravagant Halloween party every year, and this years theme was Pirates! Anna and Marie were too excited and too busy talking about the party to notice the gas gage on the beat up Chevy truck they were driving was pointing to E!
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12-20-2010, 01:33 AM
After a few more feet of driving, their truck stalled. The boys knew from the look on Anne and Marie's face that they had ran out of gas. Michael was the one leading the way with directions, and convinced the others that it would only take a little over an hour to reach the Ranch. The thought of the fun that the brothers were going to experience at the "Tripple D" was to much to handle and they all started walking down the bumpy road.
12-20-2010, 08:30 AM
RunItUpTheGut Wrote:After a few more feet of driving, their truck stalled. The boys knew from the look on Anne and Marie's face that they had ran out of gas. Michael was the one leading the way with directions, and convinced the others that it would only take a little over an hour to reach the Ranch. The thought of the fun that the brothers were going to experience at the "Tripple D" was to much to handle and they all started walking down the bumpy road.
Marie, being top heavy and clumsy, immediately regreted wearing the pair of Stiletto boots Anna had said made her look tempting! Her fears were justified, when she lost her balance and sprung her ankle while oggling the backsides of the 3 hot brothers who were dressed to kill in their pirate attire. Bryan, the youngest brother, made the suggestion to stay behind with Marie while the others proceeded to the ranch to get help!
12-20-2010, 01:45 PM
Story thus far:
Dressed in matching Bar Maid costumes, Anna and Marie Begly drove down the dark bumpy road leading to the Tripple D ranch! The Davidson brothers, Michael, Adam, and Bryan, hosted a extravagant Halloween party every year, and this years theme was Pirates! Anna and Marie were too excited and too busy talking about the party to notice the gas gage on the beat up Chevy truck they were driving was pointing to E!
After a few more feet of driving, their truck stalled. The boys knew from the look on Anne and Marie's face that they had ran out of gas. Michael was the one leading the way with directions, and convinced the others that it would only take a little over an hour to reach the Ranch. The thought of the fun that the brothers were going to experience at the "Tripple D" was to much to handle and they all started walking down the bumpy road.
Marie, being top heavy and clumsy, immediately regreted wearing the pair of Stiletto boots Anna had said made her look tempting! Her fears were justified, when she lost her balance and sprung her ankle while oggling the backsides of the 3 hot brothers who were dressed to kill in their pirate attire. Bryan, the youngest brother, made the suggestion to stay behind with Marie while the others proceeded to the ranch to get help!
My addition:
The other brothers began walking down the road. While they were walking their anticipation grew and grew as their destination was approaching. Michael turned to Adam and said, "I wonder how Marie and Bryan are doing?" Adam said, do you think they are okay? LOOK it is the Tripple D!"
Dressed in matching Bar Maid costumes, Anna and Marie Begly drove down the dark bumpy road leading to the Tripple D ranch! The Davidson brothers, Michael, Adam, and Bryan, hosted a extravagant Halloween party every year, and this years theme was Pirates! Anna and Marie were too excited and too busy talking about the party to notice the gas gage on the beat up Chevy truck they were driving was pointing to E!
After a few more feet of driving, their truck stalled. The boys knew from the look on Anne and Marie's face that they had ran out of gas. Michael was the one leading the way with directions, and convinced the others that it would only take a little over an hour to reach the Ranch. The thought of the fun that the brothers were going to experience at the "Tripple D" was to much to handle and they all started walking down the bumpy road.
Marie, being top heavy and clumsy, immediately regreted wearing the pair of Stiletto boots Anna had said made her look tempting! Her fears were justified, when she lost her balance and sprung her ankle while oggling the backsides of the 3 hot brothers who were dressed to kill in their pirate attire. Bryan, the youngest brother, made the suggestion to stay behind with Marie while the others proceeded to the ranch to get help!
My addition:
The other brothers began walking down the road. While they were walking their anticipation grew and grew as their destination was approaching. Michael turned to Adam and said, "I wonder how Marie and Bryan are doing?" Adam said, do you think they are okay? LOOK it is the Tripple D!"
12-20-2010, 05:54 PM
LWC Wrote:Story thus far:
Dressed in matching Bar Maid costumes, Anna and Marie Begly drove down the dark bumpy road leading to the Tripple D ranch! The Davidson brothers, Michael, Adam, and Bryan, hosted a extravagant Halloween party every year, and this years theme was Pirates! Anna and Marie were too excited and too busy talking about the party to notice the gas gage on the beat up Chevy truck they were driving was pointing to E!
After a few more feet of driving, their truck stalled. The boys knew from the look on Anne and Marie's face that they had ran out of gas. Michael was the one leading the way with directions, and convinced the others that it would only take a little over an hour to reach the Ranch. The thought of the fun that the brothers were going to experience at the "Tripple D" was to much to handle and they all started walking down the bumpy road.
Marie, being top heavy and clumsy, immediately regreted wearing the pair of Stiletto boots Anna had said made her look tempting! Her fears were justified, when she lost her balance and sprung her ankle while oggling the backsides of the 3 hot brothers who were dressed to kill in their pirate attire. Bryan, the youngest brother, made the suggestion to stay behind with Marie while the others proceeded to the ranch to get help!
My addition:
The other brothers began walking down the road. While they were walking their anticipation grew and grew as their destination was approaching. Michael turned to Adam and said, "I wonder how Marie and Bryan are doing?" Adam said, do you think they are okay? LOOK it is the Tripple D!"
The other guest were glad to see the group when they got inside, but was worried about the other two! Someone explained that an annoucement was made over the radio about a killer on the loose in the area! Apparently, a body was found at the Tasty Freeze and a vehicle was stolen!
12-20-2010, 07:26 PM
( This has been done on here before: I'd suggest knocking it down to a handful of words - it used to be five words, and you may get more participation than trying to think of too much to right)
It used to work like this:
Post #1: Once upon a time, a
Post #2: Dragon went for a walk
etc....
Story's stay off balance and can make for very creative posts
It used to work like this:
Post #1: Once upon a time, a
Post #2: Dragon went for a walk
etc....
Story's stay off balance and can make for very creative posts
12-20-2010, 07:30 PM
Filthy Animal Wrote:The other guest were glad to see the group when they got inside, but was worried about the other two! Someone explained that an annoucement was made over the radio about a killer on the loose in the area! Apparently, a body was found at the Tasty Freeze and a vehicle was stolen!
The Triple D, crowded as always, looked normal. The group walked around and studied the room, suspicious of every one after they had heard about the news. Worried about there friends the group asked to use the telephone to reach Bryand and Marie on their cell phones......
12-20-2010, 10:49 PM
RunItUpTheGut Wrote:The Triple D, crowded as always, looked normal. The group walked around and studied the room, suspicious of every one after they had heard about the news. Worried about there friends the group asked to use the telephone to reach Bryand and Marie on their cell phones......
Back on the road, Bryan helped Marie remove her boots so he could get a better look at her ankle. He took his time, slowly unzipping the tight leather that contained lush calves! Marie could feel his large hands tremble as the boot slipped to the ground!
12-20-2010, 11:03 PM
Just then, a noise! Bryan jumped up quickly to see what it was. No luck though, nothing could have been around them. They were all alone in the middle of nowhere right?
12-20-2010, 11:21 PM
RunItUpTheGut Wrote:Just then, a noise! Bryan jumped up quickly to see what it was. No luck though, nothing could have been around them. They were all alone in the middle of nowhere right?
When Bryan jumped up he accidently hit Marie in the mouth busting her lip! " you Jerk!", she yelled! "I can't believe I'm stuck out here with such a clumsy idiot!"
12-21-2010, 12:07 AM
Right about then Bryan heard his phone ring. After a sigh of relief he went to answer, but sure enough, it lost signal. Just then, another sound from the woods came!
12-21-2010, 12:20 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-21-2010, 12:30 AM by Filthy Animal.)
RunItUpTheGut Wrote:Right about then Bryan heard his phone ring. After a sigh of relief he went to answer, but sure enough, it lost signal. Just then, another sound from the woods came!
"Did you hear that?", asked Bryan " I know I heard something this time!"
Byran slowly edged his way to the woods. "Stop Bryan! What ever it is, just leave it alone and it won't bother us!" Marie pleaded.
12-21-2010, 12:26 AM
Then he saw it. There it was hanging from a tree. Right in front of him he sees a man, already dead and swaying back and forth. To keep maria from flipping out he quietly walks back towards her with every intention of getting out of there as soon as possible...
12-21-2010, 12:45 AM
RunItUpTheGut Wrote:Then he saw it. There it was hanging from a tree. Right in front of him he sees a man, already dead and swaying back and forth. To keep maria from flipping out he quietly walks back towards her with every intention of getting out of there as soon as possible...
Marie saw the weird expression on his face, and new something was up! "Wh..Wh..What is it?" she asked. "nothing!...lets just start moving!" he said, trying to protect her!
12-21-2010, 12:55 AM
She quickly grabbed him and said, "tell me now!", looking at her calmly he said look "we just have to get out of here!". Knowing he was serious she started walking and following Bryans lead. Meanwhile, back at the Triple D....
12-21-2010, 01:06 AM
"I still can't reach them!...Must not have service where they are!", said Michael as he turned to Adam and Anna. "Anna, stay here! Me and Adam will borrow ol' Jack's jeep and go look for them!". Anna gave him the "not without me look", and walked out the door toward the jeep!
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